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Upon reviewing my final essay I feel that its primary strength lies in its clear structure.  I feel that the introduction and conclusion are clearly presented, and the thesis is supported throughout the body paragraphs in a clear and concise way.  After carefully proofreading and review I feel that the thesis and its proof are presented using appropriate language and tone that makes it accessible to a variety of audiences without sacrificing its academic integrity.

A final evaluation of the material presented in the essay has brought to my attention that my conclusion could have posed additional questions for future research into the subject.  It clearly and concisely summarizes what the essay has brought to light, but did not necessarily go as far as I would have liked beyond that to present opportunities for further exploration into the effectiveness of the website’s form and function.[“Write my essay for me?” Get help here.]

Peer Review #1

It’s obvious that you put a lot of careful work into crafting your essay and evaluating its effectiveness.  Being able to take a step back and objectively assess its strengths and weaknesses like you have has obviously paid off.  Your review of the material presented on the website brings to light some interesting perspective on the thought process its creators must have gone through in designing it.[Need an essay writing service? Find help here.]

Peer Review #2
You don’t give yourself enough credit.  I think it’s important to be able to take a critical look at your own work as you have, but it’s equally important to acknowledge where your essay is more effective than you would let on.  It’s clear you put a good deal of thought into it, and with a little bit of extra attention to the areas of weakness you pointed out in your evaluation could only improve it further.[Click Essay Writer to order your essay]

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By Hanna Robinson

Hanna has won numerous writing awards. She specializes in academic writing, copywriting, business plans and resumes. After graduating from the Comosun College's journalism program, she went on to work at community newspapers throughout Atlantic Canada, before embarking on her freelancing journey.

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